Dre said, “They really are the mighty pirates of the Seven Seas”.
The pirates took aim and a pointy bullet hit Dre's boney wrist.
Dre’s wrist got severely injured. He shouted, “Save me’’.
Hayden and Dre swam to shore and found a man called Jackson. He took the bullet out and stitched Dre’s injured wrist.
The pirates never attacked Hayden and Dre again because they were too busy fighting other pirates.

Hi Hayden
ReplyDeleteYou have used some pretty good words to add some drama to your story; discovered, explorers, everely injured and boney wrist.
Mrs Atkins
Hi Hayden, I like your story it is exciting and scary. Poor Dre!!!
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