Monday, 17 September 2012

The Pirates Destroy Our Ship


  
One day, two young explorers, Hayden and Dre, were going around the blue wavey ocean in their brown wooden dinghy until they saw the mighty pirate galleon of the Seven Seas. They discovered that the pirates had brown Bazookas.
Dre said, “They really are the mighty pirates of the Seven Seas”.
The pirates took aim and a pointy bullet hit Dre's boney wrist.
Dre’s wrist got severely injured. He shouted, “Save me’’.
Hayden and Dre swam to shore and found a man called Jackson. He took the bullet out and stitched Dre’s injured wrist.
The pirates never attacked Hayden and Dre again because they were too busy fighting other pirates. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Hayden

    You have used some pretty good words to add some drama to your story; discovered, explorers, everely injured and boney wrist.

    Mrs Atkins

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  2. Hi Hayden, I like your story it is exciting and scary. Poor Dre!!!

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